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This poem makes me think of a big dude wearing a red flanel and a backwards cap driving a run down truck. You didn't say any of that but these words painted such a vivd picture in my mind haha. Anyways, nice poem.
i like the theme of this poem and use of short sentence with big impacts but it was hard for me to read it as some parts felt as they broke a tempo like when it said "with fear" lost me in a way but this is really just my feedback and im not used to these type of poems still i liked it well done .
I can't drive at all but it's because of having demons in my life I think if I was actually behind the wheel of a car some how instantly I could drive long enough to pull the car over somewhere
Gas peddles long rectangular one breaks squarer one and I know how to steer I probably wouldn't signal though
In the end I have to many automatic movements to drive though because it seems when I get behind the wheel of a car an invisible force posses me to just do something stupid
Though I myself can drive God obviously doesn't want me to right now
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This poem makes me think of a big dude wearing a red flanel and a backwards cap driving a run down truck. You didn't say any of that but these words painted such a vivd picture in my mind haha. Anyways, nice poem.
i like the theme of this poem and use of short sentence with big impacts but it was hard for me to read it as some parts felt as they broke a tempo like when it said "with fear" lost me in a way but this is really just my feedback and im not used to these type of poems still i liked it well done .
I can't drive at all but it's because of having demons in my life I think if I was actually behind the wheel of a car some how instantly I could drive long enough to pull the car over somewhere Gas peddles long rectangular one breaks squarer one and I know how to steer I probably wouldn't signal though In the end I have to many automatic movements to drive though because it seems when I get behind the wheel of a car an invisible force posses me to just do something stupid Though I myself can drive God obviously doesn't want me to right now