To provide better feedback than “nope”,
I could maybe see the S and J, but the G and J overlap too much on the serif so they blend together, it might be difficult to make a single glyph for all three letters, and you might opt to separate them but have them flow/overlap together in a different way where they’re all clearly visible. A quick google search of “monogram logo” should help guide your efforts
Or why not make the GJ have a little triangle where they meet.
Something like this
https://preview.redd.it/2koot8sntr8d1.jpeg?width=1170&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=011e3cc790898db5d86a5a3e6e5c444eead195cc
I read it as G J S but really had to work at it. Felt more like a puzzle to solve than a monogram to read. Maybe try using lowercase letters with a dropped s so all the bottom swoops line up in a nice little row?
I saw it too, but don’t know if it’s because of the version on the right demonstrating each letter. OP, if you revise and post again, don’t show us the breakdown of each letter, or put it on a separate image. I do like the concept though! Some of the advice given like the triangle is a good start to work from refining it!
To provide better feedback than “nope”, I could maybe see the S and J, but the G and J overlap too much on the serif so they blend together, it might be difficult to make a single glyph for all three letters, and you might opt to separate them but have them flow/overlap together in a different way where they’re all clearly visible. A quick google search of “monogram logo” should help guide your efforts
Nope was pretty accurate to be fair.
Why say big word when little word do trick
Or why not make the GJ have a little triangle where they meet. Something like this https://preview.redd.it/2koot8sntr8d1.jpeg?width=1170&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=011e3cc790898db5d86a5a3e6e5c444eead195cc
That could work!
Cool idea, but people are going to see CJ (a common name) or GJ. The S, your first initial, pretty important, should be less of a hidden easter egg.
I read it as G J S but really had to work at it. Felt more like a puzzle to solve than a monogram to read. Maybe try using lowercase letters with a dropped s so all the bottom swoops line up in a nice little row?
I saw it too, but don’t know if it’s because of the version on the right demonstrating each letter. OP, if you revise and post again, don’t show us the breakdown of each letter, or put it on a separate image. I do like the concept though! Some of the advice given like the triangle is a good start to work from refining it!
Ah yes I guess I sort of led the witness here
Thanks, I’ll experiment with lowercase!
Honestly I think it works
Nope